Bloodline Urameshi

[Juraiya]

Kekkai Genkai/Bloodline Name: Fuyu no Hauringu | Howling Winter
Location: Land of Water


Kekkai Genkai/Bloodline Description:
Fuyu no Hauringu is a Kekkai Genkai that utilizes Ice via the combination of Water and Wind chakra. Upon their Bloodline Release, the temperature in the area noticeably drops, though it is easier to use when the area is already cold- Regardless of temperature before activation though, the temperature will drop to -20 degree Celsius. Due to the natural affinity with cold, however, those who contain this bloodline are abnormally immune to the cold. Upon release, clouds form and snow begins to fall.

Due to the ninja of this clan containing a natural affinity with the cold, ice and snow, their bodies are capable of defying what many would consider natural. Similar to how those in the Yuki clan can travel through "Ice Mirrors", those in the Urameshi clan may become one with the element. Instead of traveling through ice, their bodies break into flurries of snow, able to reform within their area of control from the snow that is now falling.

Those who contain this bloodline are able to form ice and snow techniques within their range from thin air, though in reality it's ripping the moisture that is in the air (constantly being re-added by the snowfall). These techniques do not suffer weakness due to Fire as much as other ice techniques would, being sustained by the freezing temperatures as quickly as they melt, but their natural counter is still Fire. Due to its natural heat, Lightning counters this ice in the same way that the Fire does.



Kekkai Genkai/Bloodline Ability:

Jutsu Name: Sekai o Kabā | Cover the World
Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: 20 Meters - 300 Meters (depends on rank)
Hand Signs Requirement: Five
Description: Upon release of the Kekkai Genkai, the area around the Shinobi is covered in snow. This Bloodline Limit may be released starting at D rank, creating an area 20 meters in diameter with the user in its epicenter. At C rank, this increases to 50 meters. At B rank, it increases to 125 meters. At A rank, this increases further to 200 meters, with its maximum size being 300 meters at S rank. This snow comes down in a steady fall. Due to the snow being imbued with the users chakra naturally the area quickly becomes coated with the users snow. This technique itself is why the Urameshi Bloodline is great for support during large-scale conflicts, able to travel through their snow at extremely high speeds and monitor large situations. While within the Sekai o Kabā, the Urameshi shinobi may use his jutsu from the snow that is already existent within the area, as well as forming it from thin air using the moisture within the air, which is consistently replaced by the snowfall. This allows for more diversity in combat. This is a sustainable activation, meaning it costs chakra every post.

Jutsu Name: Tsundoratorabāsu | Traverse the Tundra
Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: Within Sekai o Kaba
Hand Signs Requirement: Two
Description: Upon releasing the bloodline and covering the land with snow, this permits users to break down their body into snow, reappearing anywhere where their snow falls. This technique can be used once every three posts at D-C ranks, once every two posts at B-A ranks, and once per post at S rank. The jutsus cost is equivalent to the travel distance rank. This means a D rank distance would cost the amount of a D rank jutsu, with an S rank distance costing the amount of an S rank jutsu. The maximum travel distance also depends on the amount of chakra spent. D rank travel maxes out at 20 meters traveled, while S rank chakra maxes out at 300 meters traveled. The speed is comparative to the Taijutsu Mastery speed system. D rank of this is no mastery of Taijutsu speed. C rank of this is basic Taijutsu speed. B and A are adept Taijutsu speed. S is mastery Taijutsu speed. While traveling, their vision remains locked onto a single enemy, and has normal visionary ability as if they weren't broken into snow, however they're locked on whatever enemy they choose to be locked onto. This locked on enemy has to be in vision before they break into snow, otherwise they have no vision while broken up.

Jutsu Name: Sashisematta Domein | Imminent Domain
Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: Within Sekai o Kaba
Hand Signs Requirement: One
Description: While within the Seikai o Kobā, the users of this bloodline may completely freeze enemy jutsu that are within the area, so long as the jutsu is that of water. In order to do this, the enemy jutsu can be no more than the rank of the Urameshi shinobi. For example, if the Urameshi shinobi was B rank, he could freeze enemy water techniques up to B rank. The chakra cost to freeze the enemy technique is the same as the enemy technique costs. He may also freeze physical objects that hold no rank, such as kunai and ninja star, and to do this it costs D rank chakra. Considering the fact that he uses his jutsu within his body rather than the jutsu that goes to Cover The World, he can freeze water jutsu up to his own rank even if the amount of Chakra in Cover The World is less than the enemies jutsu, since the chakra to do so comes from him and not his area of effect. This technique can only be used on water techniques up to A rank.

[Bastian]

Upon release, the area within the control becomes windy, clouds forming and snow beginning to fall.

No to weather changing. You can drop the temperature in your immediate area, and bring about the snowfall, thats it. Remove the windy bit.

These techniques do not suffer weakness due to Fire any more than they would suffer from other elements, being sustained by the freezing temperatures as quickly as they melt.

If you are immune to all ice and cold based techniques, your natural enemy will be fire. We will allow it to be slightly more resistance, as in it melts slower than regular ice, but fire will melt your ice and snow jutsu.

Jutsu Name: Sekai o Kabā | Cover the World
[b]Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: 2/5 a mile – 2 miles (Depends on rank)
Hand Signs Requirement: N/A
Description: Upon release of the Kekkai Genkai, the area around the Shinobi is covered in snow. This Bloodline Limit may be released starting at D rank, creating an area 2/5 of a mile in diameter with the user in its epicenter. With every rank up, this size increases by 2/5 of a mile, its maximum size taking up 2 miles in diameter around the Shinobi. This snow comes down in a steady fall with winds up to twenty miles per hour blowing through the area. Due to the snow being imbued with the users chakra naturally the area quickly becomes coated with the users snow. This technique itself is why the Urameshi Bloodline is great for support during large-scale conflicts, able to travel through their snow at extremely high speeds and monitor large situations. Further jutsu used by the Shinobi can be formed from this snow or even from within the thin air, and while this doesn't reduce technique time, it gives a larger variety of how to use the techniques.

Range - D rank maxes out a 20 meters. S-rank maxes out 300 meters. You will need to specify the range of the other ranks used since this is a D-S. I will let you decide those numbers.
Description - Remove that bit of that explains what the snow is used for. Since you have jutsu that explain what the snow is used for its just pointless information that could mislead anyone who wants to join your bloodline (with your permission of course).

Jutsu Name: Reitō rerumu | Frozen Realm
Rank: N/A
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: Within Sekai o Kaba
Hand Signs Requirement: None
Description: While within the Sekai o Kabā, the Urameshi shinobi may create techniques from the snow that is already existent within the area, as well as forming it from thin air using the moisture within the air, which is consistently replaced by the snowfall. This allows for more diversity in combat. This technique is not actually a jutsu so much as an ability that is tied in with Sekai o Kaba, however to exemplify how important it is to the bloodline, it’s specified as a separate ability.

This doesn't need to be a jutsu since its basically saying the obvious of you being able to manipulate snow. You can remove it.

Jutsu Name: Tsundoratorabāsu | Traverse the Tundra
Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: Within Sekai o Kaba
Hand Signs Requirement: One (one handed)
Description: Upon releasing the bloodline and covering the land with snow, this permits users to break down their body into snow, reappearing anywhere where their snow falls. This technique can be used once every three posts at D-C ranks, once every two posts at B-A ranks, and once per post at S rank. The jutsus cost is equivalent to the users rank.

Range - Similar to the range for Cover the Word, the cost is equal to that range of snow fall so long as it is within the range. Basically, If you use a D rank amount of chakra, you can move with 20 meters. If you use an S rank amount of chakra you can cover the full 300 meters. Make sure you add this detail into the description.
Seals - No One Hand seals. That will be made into a limited technique and will need to be purchased. Since that list isn't up yet, you can't have it. Remove that please.

Jutsu Name: Sashisematta Domein | Imminent Domain
Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: Within Sekai o Kaba
Hand Signs Requirement: One (one handed)
Description: While within the Seikai o Kobā, the users of this bloodline may completely freeze enemy jutsu that are within the area. In order to do this, the enemy jutsu can be no more than 1 rank above the Urameshi shinobi. For example, if the Urameshi shinobi was B rank, he could freeze enemy techniques up to A rank. This costs chakra equivalent to 1 rank below the technique they are stopping, or D rank if the technique itself is D rank. For other ice jutsu, rather than freezing it further, the ice is broken apart into snow.

Denied. You can't freeze jutsu. Physical objects are more likely, but the physical object has hold no rank (basic ninja tools and the like) or water jutsu that are lower rank than your own amount of chakra that your putting into the jutsu. A higher rank water jutsu, however, can still be used to damage you. Make the edits or remove the jutsu completely. Also the same rule for the one handed hand signs apply for this as well.

[Juraiya]

Bumpskie

[Bastian]

Jutsu Name: Sekai o Kabā | Cover the World
Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
[b]Range: 2/5 a mile – 2 miles (Depends on rank)
Hand Signs Requirement: N/A
Description: Upon release of the Kekkai Genkai, the area around the Shinobi is covered in snow. This Bloodline Limit may be released starting at D rank, creating an area 20 meters in diameter with the user in its epicenter. At C rank, this increases to 50 meters. At B rank, it increases to 125 meters. At A rank, this increases further to 200 meters, with its maximum size being 300 meters at S rank. This snow comes down in a steady fall. Due to the snow being imbued with the users chakra naturally the area quickly becomes coated with the users snow. This technique itself is why the Urameshi Bloodline is great for support during large-scale conflicts, able to travel through their snow at extremely high speeds and monitor large situations.

You still have the range stating miles. Edit that out. I bolded the part I was talking about.

Jutsu Name: Reitō rerumu | Frozen Realm
Rank: N/A
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: Within Sekai o Kaba
Hand Signs Requirement: None
Description: While within the Sekai o Kabā, the Urameshi shinobi may use his jutsu from the snow that is already existent within the area, as well as forming it from thin air using the moisture within the air, which is consistently replaced by the snowfall. This allows for more diversity in combat. This technique is not actually a jutsu so much as an ability that is tied in with Sekai o Kaba, however to exemplify how important it is to the bloodline, it’s specified as a separate ability. Due to the chakra of enemies distorting his own techniques field, he cannot form techniques within 2 meters of an opponent, unless the technique is coming from his own body.

I know what we discussed on skype, but the more I read this the more I feel it just need to be stated in the Bloodlines ability. Its confusing to have this as a jutsu since its actually not. Just but it back in the Bloodline description and simply make jutsu that specify this range. Its easier to understand that way, otherwise we will constantly have to explain this every time a you get a member for your bloodline. Sorry for the inconvenience homie.

Jutsu Name: Tsundoratorabāsu | Traverse the Tundra
Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: Within Sekai o Kaba
Hand Signs Requirement: None
Description: Upon releasing the bloodline and covering the land with snow, this permits users to break down their body into snow, reappearing anywhere where their snow falls. This technique can be used once every three posts at D-C ranks, once every two posts at B-A ranks, and once per post at S rank. The jutsus cost is equivalent to the travel distance rank. This means a D rank distance would cost the amount of a D rank jutsu, with an S rank distance costing the amount of an S rank jutsu.

Specify in the description that the rank distance traveled goes hand in hand with the distance the Sekai o Kabā | Cover the World covers by rank. Again this is just to eliminate the answer a bunch of questions about the distance. D Rank moves within 20m, C-rank moves within 50 meters, ect.

Jutsu Name: Sashisematta Domein | Imminent Domain
Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: Within Sekai o Kaba
Hand Signs Requirement: One (one handed)
Description: While within the Seikai o Kobā, the users of this bloodline may completely freeze enemy jutsu that are within the area, so long as the jutsu is that of water. In order to do this, the enemy jutsu can be no more than the rank of the Urameshi shinobi. For example, if the Urameshi shinobi was B rank, he could freeze enemy water techniques up to B rank. The chakra cost to freeze the enemy technique is the same as the enemy technique costs. He may also freeze physical objects that hold no rank, such as kunai and ninja star.

No one hand weaving. And also in regards to what he can freeze. I meant the shinobi has to put out a B rank amount of chakra, not his actual shinobi rank. If you say only put out a C rank amount of chakra to cover 50 meters in snow, and get attacked with a B rank water jutsu, you wouldn't be able to freeze it even if you were a B-Rank shinobi. It's more about chakra vs chakra than shinobi vs chakra.

[Bastian]

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[Mod-Man]

Kekkai Genkai/Bloodline Name: Fuyu no Hauringu | Howling Winter
Location: Land of Water


Kekkai Genkai/Bloodline Description:
Fuyu no Hauringu is a Kekkai Genkai that utilizes Ice via the combination of Water and Wind chakra. Upon their Bloodline Release, the temperature in the area noticeably drops, though it is easier to use when the area is already cold- Regardless of temperature before activation though, the temperature will drop to -20 degree Celsius. Due to the natural affinity with cold, however, those who contain this bloodline are abnormally immune to the cold. Upon release, clouds form and snow begins to fall.

Due to the ninja of this clan containing a natural affinity with the cold, ice and snow, their bodies are capable of defying what many would consider natural. Similar to how those in the Yuki clan can travel through "Ice Mirrors", those in the Urameshi clan may become one with the element. Instead of traveling through ice, their bodies break into flurries of snow, able to reform within their area of control from the snow that is now falling.

Those who contain this bloodline are able to form ice and snow techniques within their range from thin air, though in reality it's ripping the moisture that is in the air (constantly being re-added by the snowfall). These techniques do not suffer weakness due to Fire as much as other ice techniques would, being sustained by the freezing temperatures as quickly as they melt, but their natural counter is still Fire.

Gimme another weakness, because right now the only weakness this ice has is that it's "kinda weak to fire"

Kekkai Genkai/Bloodline Ability:

Jutsu Name: Sekai o Kabā | Cover the World
Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: 20 Meters - 300 Meters (depends on rank)
Hand Signs Requirement: N/A
Description: Upon release of the Kekkai Genkai, the area around the Shinobi is covered in snow. This Bloodline Limit may be released starting at D rank, creating an area 20 meters in diameter with the user in its epicenter. At C rank, this increases to 50 meters. At B rank, it increases to 125 meters. At A rank, this increases further to 200 meters, with its maximum size being 300 meters at S rank. This snow comes down in a steady fall. Due to the snow being imbued with the users chakra naturally the area quickly becomes coated with the users snow. This technique itself is why the Urameshi Bloodline is great for support during large-scale conflicts, able to travel through their snow at extremely high speeds and monitor large situations. While within the Sekai o Kabā, the Urameshi shinobi may use his jutsu from the snow that is already existent within the area, as well as forming it from thin air using the moisture within the air, which is consistently replaced by the snowfall. This allows for more diversity in combat. This is a sustainable activation, meaning it costs chakra every post.

Gimme some hand signs, you're summoning or generating a bunch of snow, I want a few hand signs (please don't do just one, make this easy on me)

Jutsu Name: Tsundoratorabāsu | Traverse the Tundra
Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: Within Sekai o Kaba
Hand Signs Requirement: None
Description: Upon releasing the bloodline and covering the land with snow, this permits users to break down their body into snow, reappearing anywhere where their snow falls. This technique can be used once every three posts at D-C ranks, once every two posts at B-A ranks, and once per post at S rank. The jutsus cost is equivalent to the travel distance rank. This means a D rank distance would cost the amount of a D rank jutsu, with an S rank distance costing the amount of an S rank jutsu. The maximum travel distance also depends on the amount of chakra spent. D rank travel maxes out at 20 meters traveled, while S rank chakra maxes out at 300 meters traveled.

What's the speed? (give me examples in terms of taijutsu mastery speed tiers to make this easier) Also what are the visual capabilities? Are you blind because your eyes are now snow? Can you detect stuff in your immediate area? Also gimme some hand signs

Jutsu Name: Sashisematta Domein | Imminent Domain
Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: Within Sekai o Kaba
Hand Signs Requirement: One
Description: While within the Seikai o Kobā, the users of this bloodline may completely freeze enemy jutsu that are within the area, so long as the jutsu is that of water. In order to do this, the enemy jutsu can be no more than the rank of the Urameshi shinobi. For example, if the Urameshi shinobi was B rank, he could freeze enemy water techniques up to B rank. The chakra cost to freeze the enemy technique is the same as the enemy technique costs. He may also freeze physical objects that hold no rank, such as kunai and ninja star. Considering the fact that he uses his jutsu within his body rather than the jutsu that goes to Cover The World, he can freeze water jutsu up to his own rank even if the amount of Chakra in Cover The World is less than the enemies jutsu, since the chakra to do so comes from him and not his area of effect.

You can freeze up to A-Rank water jutsus, not S-Ranked ones though, also what's the chakra cost for freezing tools? (I'm fine with it being like D for a tool or something, doesn't have to be big, just has to cost something)

[Juraiya]

Edited senpai ;3; Be gentle. It's my first time with you.

[Mod-Man]

Kekkai Genkai/Bloodline Name: Fuyu no Hauringu | Howling Winter
Location: Land of Water


Kekkai Genkai/Bloodline Description:
Fuyu no Hauringu is a Kekkai Genkai that utilizes Ice via the combination of Water and Wind chakra. Upon their Bloodline Release, the temperature in the area noticeably drops, though it is easier to use when the area is already cold- Regardless of temperature before activation though, the temperature will drop to -20 degree Celsius. Due to the natural affinity with cold, however, those who contain this bloodline are abnormally immune to the cold. Upon release, clouds form and snow begins to fall.

Due to the ninja of this clan containing a natural affinity with the cold, ice and snow, their bodies are capable of defying what many would consider natural. Similar to how those in the Yuki clan can travel through "Ice Mirrors", those in the Urameshi clan may become one with the element. Instead of traveling through ice, their bodies break into flurries of snow, able to reform within their area of control from the snow that is now falling.

Those who contain this bloodline are able to form ice and snow techniques within their range from thin air, though in reality it's ripping the moisture that is in the air (constantly being re-added by the snowfall). These techniques do not suffer weakness due to Fire as much as other ice techniques would, being sustained by the freezing temperatures as quickly as they melt, but their natural counter is still Fire. Due to its natural heat, Lightning counters this ice in the same way that the Fire does.



Kekkai Genkai/Bloodline Ability:

Jutsu Name: Sekai o Kabā | Cover the World
[b]Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: 20 Meters - 300 Meters (depends on rank)
Hand Signs Requirement: Five
Description: Upon release of the Kekkai Genkai, the area around the Shinobi is covered in snow. This Bloodline Limit may be released starting at D rank, creating an area 20 meters in diameter with the user in its epicenter. At C rank, this increases to 50 meters. At B rank, it increases to 125 meters. At A rank, this increases further to 200 meters, with its maximum size being 300 meters at S rank. This snow comes down in a steady fall. Due to the snow being imbued with the users chakra naturally the area quickly becomes coated with the users snow. This technique itself is why the Urameshi Bloodline is great for support during large-scale conflicts, able to travel through their snow at extremely high speeds and monitor large situations. While within the Sekai o Kabā, the Urameshi shinobi may use his jutsu from the snow that is already existent within the area, as well as forming it from thin air using the moisture within the air, which is consistently replaced by the snowfall. This allows for more diversity in combat. This is a sustainable activation, meaning it costs chakra every post.

Jutsu Name: Tsundoratorabāsu | Traverse the Tundra
Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: Within Sekai o Kaba
Hand Signs Requirement: Two
Description: Upon releasing the bloodline and covering the land with snow, this permits users to break down their body into snow, reappearing anywhere where their snow falls. This technique can be used once every three posts at D-C ranks, once every two posts at B-A ranks, and once per post at S rank. The jutsus cost is equivalent to the travel distance rank. This means a D rank distance would cost the amount of a D rank jutsu, with an S rank distance costing the amount of an S rank jutsu. The maximum travel distance also depends on the amount of chakra spent. D rank travel maxes out at 20 meters traveled, while S rank chakra maxes out at 300 meters traveled. The speed is comparative to the Taijutsu Mastery speed system. D rank of this is no mastery of Taijutsu speed. C rank of this is basic Taijutsu speed. B and A are adept Taijutsu speed. S is mastery Taijutsu speed. While traveling, their vision remains locked onto a single enemy, and has normal visionary ability as if they weren't broken into snow, however they're locked on whatever enemy they choose to be locked onto. This locked on enemy has to be in vision before they break into snow, otherwise they have no vision while broken up.

Jutsu Name: Sashisematta Domein | Imminent Domain
Rank: D-S
Type: Kekkai Genkai
Element: Ice
Range: Within Sekai o Kaba
Hand Signs Requirement: One
Description: While within the Seikai o Kobā, the users of this bloodline may completely freeze enemy jutsu that are within the area, so long as the jutsu is that of water. In order to do this, the enemy jutsu can be no more than the rank of the Urameshi shinobi. For example, if the Urameshi shinobi was B rank, he could freeze enemy water techniques up to B rank. The chakra cost to freeze the enemy technique is the same as the enemy technique costs. He may also freeze physical objects that hold no rank, such as kunai and ninja star, and to do this it costs D rank chakra. Considering the fact that he uses his jutsu within his body rather than the jutsu that goes to Cover The World, he can freeze water jutsu up to his own rank even if the amount of Chakra in Cover The World is less than the enemies jutsu, since the chakra to do so comes from him and not his area of effect. This technique can only be used on water techniques up to A rank.

Looks good, 2/2 stamp. Have fun

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